Application Post

[bravenewmods]

THIS POST IS FOR ARCHIVE PURPOSES ONLY. YOU CAN FIND THE NEW APPLICATION POST HERE.

Applications are currently OPEN.


Interested in applying to Brave New World? Simply fill out the form below and submit it! We do have some rules, though.

-Brave New World is an Alternate Universe game. All canon characters must be crafted specifically into the setting in order to be applied. Additionally, Original Characters may be applied, they too must be specifically crafted to the setting.

-You are permitted to either post the application directly to this page in a comment or to post the application elsewhere (preferably your character's journal) and link it in a comment here.

-Applications may take up to one week to process, and revisions up to three days. We'll do our best to get to them as soon as possible, however.

-If you are asked for revisions, please re-submit them within 72 hours of mod response. If no revisions are received within that period of time, your character will be made available again and someone else may submit an application for them.

-If you are rejected, don't worry, you can always try again! We currently have no limits on how many times a person may apply for a character; however, we do reserve the right to ban a person from apping a certain character if it gets too far out of hand.

-We do not accept application challenges. If you apply for a character that already has been applied for or reserved by somebody else, the other person will receive due consideration first. If they are rejected, their reserve expires, or they fail to re-submit revisions within 72 hours of a mod revision request, then, and only then, will we consider your application.

A Guide to Ease the Process of Applying - Skip if You Feel Prepared
As there is quite a bit of information to get through, we do encourage everyone to read through all the pages in the Directory before applying. However, pages that absolutely need to be read include the following:

Premise: A description of the game, and an introduction to the history of Union (the city in which the characters live) and what it means to be Enlightened.
Rules and FAQ: A basic Q&A addressing game mechanics can be found in the FAQ, including a basic outline concerning Bonding with Pokémon and rules concerning levels and Pokémon attacks, a description of our communication network (Warp Bands), and a description of Enlightened and Enhanced Items.
The City of Union: A post describing the physical locations within the City of Union. New areas may be added by players as they wish.
Society & Culture: A post describing the culture and the social mores of the civilization within Union as well as a listing of important Union-specific professions. You may choose to have your character serve as one of these professions or as another less Pokémon-specific profession like 'waiter' or 'chef'. This post may be of particular importance for crafting a working AU for your character.
The Enlightened: A post describing what it means to be Enlightened as well as Enlightened abilities you may choose for your character and how they affect game mechanics. As a note, any character who does not want to have special skills should choose the skill 'Far from Ordinary', which essentially means they do not have powers.
Training, Bonding, and Leveling: While this post is not essential for reading before the app, the details given on bonding with Pokémon will need to be understood to get the most out of the game.
Starter Pokémon: A list of all the starter Pokémon that may be chosen. Please pick one and note it in your application. Your starter does not have to share one of your character's types.
AU Planning: Before applying, it may be helpful to glance through this post and see if you can make plans with someone to have prior CR or to otherwise plan for future CR. You may also post on our Plotting Comm, which is open to all, to see if anyone would be willing to hash out some AU details with you.
Plot Timeline: As the game has been running now for several months, it may be helpful to glance through to see which events your character would logically have experienced as a citizen of Union before you begin to play them.

Prior to February 3rd, 2014, we asked that anyone who wished to apply a character from outside Union contact us first for approval. However, this no longer requires approval as long as the character is from a small, outside settlement and does not intend to return. If you intend to make use of a large civilization outside of Union, please still do contact us so we can discuss details. We generally prefer characters to come from settlements already established in game. We also ask that you contact us to talk things over if you plan to include any major actions by the NPCs of the city of Union in your application: for example, if you are attempting to app a murderer and you need to talk about how Union would respond to his crime.

Whenever in doubt, please feel free to contact the mods with any questions you may have! If your application includes some detail that conflicts with the established societal norms of Union, we'll respond to let you know. This does not mean your app is unacceptable! We absolutely want to work with everyone to make sure they can get an AU that they can enjoy. At the most extreme end, we can even accommodate things like people who want to work to bring down Union, but again, please do contact us to hash out details.


To submit an application, fill out the form below and submit it:

<big><b>PLAYER INFO</b></big> <b>Name:</b> (What you go by online.) <b>Contact Information:</b> (How other people can reach you. Personal journal, e-mail, AIM, Plurk, etc.) <b>Time Zone:</b> (What time zone do you live in?) <b>Characters Played:</b> (What other characters, if any, do you play already in Brave New World?) <big><b>CHARACTER INFO</b></big> <b>Character Name:</b> <b>Character Canon:</b> <b>History:</b> (A wiki link to your character’s history can suffice. However, if there is no wiki or there isn’t enough information on it, we will require you to write it out. OCs are exempt from this section) <b>AU History:</b> (This is required for all characters to integrate them into the setting. It can be reasonably simple, or it can be more complex. You may integrate other characters into your history with their permission.) <b>Canon Personality:</b> (We want to see how well you know your character’s personality. We expect at least four full paragraphs of information about them that encompasses a solid overview of their motivations, strengths, and weaknesses. This personality should be based on their original canon appearance.) <b>AU Deviation:</b> (The nature of the AU is such that the character's personal history will be different, be it in simple or dramatic ways. Due to a much different upbringing, we expect there to be at least some variation, even if small. Spend at least one paragraph detailing in what ways the character differs from their canon incarnation.) <b>Canon Abilities:</b> (Please list their abilities, be they mundane and supernatural. This includes items of power such as giant robots or magic weapons, and what they can do.) <b>Enlightened Abilities:</b> (While your character will not have access to their canon abilities, they will instead gain access to up to two Pokémon types as outlined here: http://www.serebii.net/xy/typechart.shtml Through these types, they will be able to take on an ability set that can mimic their canon abilities. Additionally, they will gain access to special trainer abilities as detailed here: http://bravenewmods.dreamwidth.org/715.html While filling out this section, a good format would be to describe initial abilities and the way the abilities will develop after the first and second evolutions. If your character has no canon powers, they may still be an Enlightened. However, we ask that the abilities you choose generally make some sense for the character, whether it's related to personality or other canon considerations. While complex vehicles are beyond the technology level of Union, characters may, as part of their overall composition, use Enhanced items that have aspects of an available Pokémon. A character may begin with a single Enhanced item, such as a sword that contains the Fire type. This is generally recommended to be similar to something they use in canon.) <b>Starter Pokémon:</b> (Pick one from the list found here: http://bravenewmods.dreamwidth.org/968.html. Additionally, you may pick a single common Pokémon from the map post found here: http://bravenewmods.dreamwidth.org/5884.html from any of the Verdant Forest or Old City areas. If you have the "Far from Ordinary" perk, you may pick two starters and one Verdant Forest/Old City Common. Starter Pokémon need not share your type. You are not required to pick a starter; you may start with no Pokémon if desired.) <b>Notes/Special Considerations:</b> If you have special things you want to do with your character that can potentially impact the plot such as giving them an ancient power from a clan thought long extinct, this is the place to put it. It's suggested that you contact the moderators beforehand to hash things out if you want to do anything dramatic. You may also PM or IM one of the moderators beforehand if you wish to get the section pre-approved or ask questions on what is and is not allowed. <big><b>SAMPLES</b></big> (NOTE: You may link a previous entry or thread, including testrun or musebox threads (but NOT Dear Mun), for one or both samples. However, we want to see the character in the setting of Brave New World and specifically in their AU for at least one sample.) <b>First-Person:</b> (Also known as “commentspam.” This is from the character’s perspective and helps us determine how well you grasp your character’s voice. The minimum is six sentences. If we deem that there is not enough spoken or written dialogue, we will ask you for more. If you link an outside entry or thread, the minimum is 10 comments from your character in one thread/with one character.) <b>Third-Person:</b> (This is written in prose from an independent narrator’s perspective. Here we want to see an insight into your character’s unspoken behavior -- actions, thoughts, their view of their world, etc. The minimum here is two paragraphs. If we do not get a good sense of your character’s behavior, we will ask for more. If you link an outside entry or thread, the minimum is 20 comments from your character in two threads/with two characters.) If desired, you may answer some of the following questions in lieu of samples. The questions must be answered in-character, as if they are being asked by a teacher, mentor, or superior. If your character is lying in their answer, please identify it as a lie. The purpose of these is to get an idea of how you will play your character in lieu of the other sample options. 4 questions answered can be used as a substitute for a first-person sample, and 6 questions answered can be used as a substitute for a third-person sample. Both samples may be replaced in this manner. If the character doesn't say enough in their answer, we may request a few more answers for an acceptable sample. -What would you say the role of Pokémon is in your life? -What do you feel your role in your city is? -What do you seek for humanity’s future? -To what lengths would you go to rescue your allies if they were lost in the wilderness? -What would you say the most important occupation is within your city? -What does the story of the Savior mean to you? -What aspects and traits do you respect most in your individual fellow man? -What do you look for in the Pokémon with whom you bond? -What do you think your Pokémon respect most about you? -The gods of old have returned. How would you be judged if you were chosen as a representative of humanity? -A human has attacked a wild Pokémon who retaliates in defense. How do you respond and whom do you defend? -You are alone and bereft of your Pokémon allies; upon what strengths do you rely on to see yourself safely home? -What would you say is your greatest duty, and why? -You plunge into the depths of ruins of an ancient civilization. What is it that you seek from the past? Treasure, technology, wisdom? -When encountering a rare and powerful Pokémon, what is most important? Researching it, bonding with it, or defeating it? Why? -What do you do to ensure we never again awaken the wrath of the gods upon humanity? -What strengths make you most qualified for your role within your city? -In your eyes, what is absolutely unforgivable? -No Enlightened chooses their abilities - and not all are Enlightened. What type abilities would you most desire to manifest and why? -What area do you seek to explore? The peaceful forest, in search of new, previously overlooked discoveries; the uncharted caves, in search of the unknown; or the wildest of mountain terrain, in search of danger, adventure, and thrills?

Comments

Revision Request!

[bravenewmods]

Hi! Thanks for applying to the game!

We would like to see just a bit more in the Enlightened abilities section. Specifically we want you to nail down the extent of his abilities so we can see it more clearly. Barrier should be breakable with enough application of force (how much?) and we want you to decide the range of his teleporting (the max can be up to a few miles). Noting the changes through evolution could be helpful to gauge his abilities better.

Jayce | League of Legends | Reserved

[stop_cannontime]

I fight for a brighter tomorrow.

Approved!

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is League of Legends: Jayce.

Cynthia | Pokémon (Gameverse) | Reserved

[chompion]

"What's necessary to become stronger? I think it's important to never lose your love of Pokémon."

Revision Request

[bravenewmods]

The app is pretty much good to go, we just would like to see a bit more on what she can actually DO with her typing. Even if it's just simulating various attacks, since she is an Enlightened we'd like to see at least a basic outline of the powers she has and will eventually acquire, as well as what might occur as she evolves.

The special consideration as a note is acceptable as requested.

[chompion]

Thanks. Here's a quick summary of the revision you've asked for:

• Cynthia will be able to touch most flame unless it's coming directly from a more powerful Enlightened or a Pokémon that aims to hurt her. An example would be if she were to drop a torch and fumble for it, accidentally grabbing the part lit on fire, it wouldn't hurt her. Anything she might be wearing may catch on fire, but her skin itself wouldn't blister. However, if she were attacked, the flame might actually inflict pain upon her. As she grows stronger, her skin will "toughen" like the hide of a dragon.


• Whenever her skin begins to "harden", it's possible that it will start to look as if it's dried out. In actuality, it'll be more scale-like in nature and able to withstand being hit.


• At some point, she will have the ability to breath fire. It will likely be a painful evolution as it would involve creating an organ within her she's without right now, but once she has it, she'll be able to do so without being hurt. As a bonus, she can eat spicy food without burning her tongue. Huzzah!


• Her nails will go stronger and be capable of gripping earth, wood, and possibly harder surfaces as she further evolves. This will be handy if she slips while climbing up or down.


• She won't enjoy water initially and will be frightened of it due to her Flame type. This may settle down once she discovers she also has the Dragon type within her.


• Her limbs will strengthen and she'll be able to push herself at greater limits. Running at speeds unnatural for humans is a possibility, but that's much further down the road.


• She won't be able to ever fly like a Dragon type can, but she may be able to move at high enough speed that she would be able to mimic it (much like a Garchomp).

Hopefully those examples are just fine? I'm not sure if she ever will evolve that far or even further, but it won't be anything too game breaking. I plan to have her follow an evolution closely related to her Garchomp in canon, so the abilities she gain would be similar to her's. The most powerful would likely be "Draco Meter".

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is pokemon diamond and pearl: cynthia.

[chompion]

Thank you very much! :)

Minako Aino | Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon | Reserved

[aidolsenshi]

The Goddess of Love and Beauty is here~

Approved!

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is sailor moon: minako aino.

Rikka Hishikawa | Doki Doki! Pretty Cure | Reserved

[wisdomslight]

The light of wisdom! Cure Diamond!

Aida Mana | Doki Doki! Pretty Cure | Reserved

[abundantlove]

I, Cure Heart, will return your heart thumping excitement!

Approved!

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is [doki doki! pretty cure: rikka hishikawa].

Notes:
-Since the transformation as presented by the wiki seems to be more or less clothing and hair, it probably won't do too much by the way of disguise. They can always wear masks, though.
-Since Diamond Blizzard seems to be an extremely powerful attack, it would be preferred if you initially used/treated it as if it had the same power level as Diamond Shower. Super overcharging with negative effects on Rikka will be fine for dramatic moments once she's fully evolved.

[wisdomslight]

Ah yes, the intent was to use Blizzard basically like Shower unless otherwise approved to do otherwise. (Blizzard is used twice, once which is more ... standardized, and once which is absolutely absurd. I'm looking for it generally using it towards the more standard version, since if I ever have excuse to do the supercharged version that way it's also just there.) So thanks, that's actually precisely what I had in mind~ :)

Clarification Requested!

[bravenewmods]

Your app looks great, but in regards to this line:

"Another life-changing incident would come later when Mana stumbled into a battle between Dark Pokémon and a legendary warrior known as a Pretty Cure."

Are you referring to another one of the Pretty Cures that have been apped? I assume not, as Alice and Rikka seem to have become Pretty Cures through knowing Mana. If so, would you be amenable to changing this so that Mana discovered her power of her own accord? This is mostly just to avoid having random NPC Pretty Cures running around.

[abundantlove]

That's fine, but it raises the question of how she found out what a Pretty Cure was. Is it alright to say Pretty Cure from the past are a matter of historical record or legend? Alice's app hints at that, more or less.

[bravenewmods]

Yep, that's fine! As established by Alice's app, Pretty Cures will be documented in the setting, and the information would be there for people who search it out although it won't be anywhere near widely disseminated (since the majority of characters in the game will doubtlessly not know anything about Pretty Cures).

[abundantlove]

Okay, necessary edits have been made. Does that look alright?

Approved!

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is [doki doki! pretty cure: aida mana].

Notes: Just making a public note that those are OK as discussed through other forums!
Also would you prefer her name in Western order or Japanese order in the tag? I went with what you had in the app, but if you want it switched, let us know!

Re: Approved!

[abundantlove]

Mana Aida, since that's what she'll be referred to in game.

[bravenewmods]

Changed to [doki doki! pretty cure: mana aida]

[fistfullofmagic]

Starting out, his physical attack power here is about the same as any human of his size that keeps themselves in good physical condition... It's just that he happens to be about six foot seven. In general his powers are more geared toward defense.

Initially he can produce barriers that can absorb most of the energy of attacks, albeit for no more than two minutes at a go and requires fairly intense concentration. As he evolves he can use this for longer periods - let's say eight minutes after evolving once and maxing out at around twenty minutes as an estimate - and the need to focus solely on maintaining the shield decreases. While it helps defend against both physical and special attacks, it works best at defending against physical strikes. Maintained special attacks (ex: continuously using Flamethrower on him) tend to break down the shield more quickly the higher in power they are, although consecutive physical strikes also wear away at the shield as well. It's really ineffective against electrical attacks of any sort. It becomes more durable as he evolves The exact nature of this particular power may change a bit depending on if happenings in the game would prompt him to focus more on this, but it should otherwise pretty much follow this pattern. The basic idea is that it should probably remind you of Mew's bubble barrier in The First Movie.

He can grab, lift, and throw objects up to the approximate mass of himself via telekinesis. The distance he's able to throw them is directly proportional to how much force he could put behind it if he were to throw the object the normal way, plus factoring in how aerodynamic the object in question is. While he can lift multiple objects at once, their total mass cannot exceed his own mass. This can be self-directed to allow him to hover for a couple minutes, although the most lift he can really achieve initially is about knee height. The ability to lift objects increases proportional to 1.5 times his body weight, then 2.25 times what he weights, and the amount of force he can put behind it scales proportionately to what he can lift. For the levitation, it scales so that he can progress towards fifteen minute bursts of low-altitude flight at the highest level.

Teleportation is also something he can do, specializing in shorter range and fairly rapidfire teleportation rather than long distance. Initially this means only about 300 feet tops, and generally is far less taxing on him if he teleports to a spot within fifty feet of himself. As long as he has the time to orientate himself to his new position after changing his position in space (the human brain isn't designed to immediately know exactly where the body is when it's suddenly displaced without any points in between the here and there, so even with training this will take a few seconds), he can pretty much teleport immediately afterwards. The total distance he can go upon evolution is upped to 1000 ft, then 2000 ft. Theoretically he could train himself to be able to go farther in a single go rather than train himself for a series of hops, but his logic is that it's generally a better idea to be able to get a visual on where he's going since it reduces the likelihood of doing something like teleporting partially inside an object or living being.

He can read people/pokemon's surface thoughts if he devotes a sizable portion of his attention to it, and if he devotes almost all of his effort, he can pinpoint where a specific individual is within a certain range. The range starts at around a quarter mile, then expands to half a mile, and maxes out at about a mile. Depending on how events in the game go, I may have some additions that would likely need to be discussed with mods beforehand, but as things are not likely to go that direction this is just a "just in case" clause.

Lastly, he has one water attack that's basically equivalent to Water Pulse. Water Pulse will eventually work its way up to Surf, then finally to roughly mimicking this spell. This works pretty much exactly like in the games, although it's effectiveness depends on how much moisture is in the surrounding environment, i.e. if he's near a body of water or it's raining is when it'll be when these attacks are at their most effective, and if he's in a fairly dry environment his attack will be decreased.

Approved!

[bravenewmods]

Congratulations! You have been accepted into Brave New World! Here’s what to do next:

-Join bravenewworld, bravenewmeta, bravenewstories, and, if you wish, zubatopia
-Make a post in bravenewmeta to introduce yourself and your character
-Alphabetically by player name, add your information to the Contact Page.
-Add your information to the Taken Page by filling out the form.
-If your character is part of an organization like the City Guard, go to the Organization page and fill out the form there.
-If you haven’t already, swing by bravenewstories and put up a plotting post to get your character in on the action.
-As the game progresses, please keep track of your Pokémon and other acquisitions/statistics on a post within your own journal. An example template may be seen here.
-Your character tag for use on the IC comm is Tales of Phantasia: Dhaos.

Absol (OC) | Pokemon | (not reserved)

[unreined]

A wild ABSOL appeared!

Revision Request

[bravenewmods]

For the most part this application is good, but since this is an Original Character we'd like to see a bit more detail in the history. Some details to fill in are how her clan operated, what her immediate family or pack was like, and how they viewed her awakening as an Enlightened Shifter.