Your app looks great, but in regards to this line:
"Another life-changing incident would come later when Mana stumbled into a battle between Dark Pokémon and a legendary warrior known as a Pretty Cure."
Are you referring to another one of the Pretty Cures that have been apped? I assume not, as Alice and Rikka seem to have become Pretty Cures through knowing Mana. If so, would you be amenable to changing this so that Mana discovered her power of her own accord? This is mostly just to avoid having random NPC Pretty Cures running around.
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"Another life-changing incident would come later when Mana stumbled into a battle between Dark Pokémon and a legendary warrior known as a Pretty Cure."
Are you referring to another one of the Pretty Cures that have been apped? I assume not, as Alice and Rikka seem to have become Pretty Cures through knowing Mana. If so, would you be amenable to changing this so that Mana discovered her power of her own accord? This is mostly just to avoid having random NPC Pretty Cures running around.