principilucis: (glance)
Marth ([personal profile] principilucis) wrote in [personal profile] bravenewmods 2014-04-30 12:53 am (UTC)

Re: Revision Request!

Thank you for the feedback!

Before I start rewriting the app, I'd like to ask a few clarification questions about what is acceptable.

Is it alright if I change the Medeus/Naga conflict to just naming them as the Shadow Dragon and the Divine Dragon, instead of mentioning their species? I will change the Falchion and the Shield of Seals accordingly to just gifted artifacts as well. The Falchion will be powered down, and Marth will only regain the Shield of Seals when he returns to an Aegislash Shifter.

Though with regards to the war portrayal, I think it should also be mentioned that the Alteans themselves did not commit said atrocious acts due to the decree of the King. To then, their perception is of a good vs evil war - though I do agree that after they fully understood the situation, they would feel that they we're simply bystanders caught in the conflict.

If such clarification is added, would it be enough? Or is more tweaking needed?


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