Heya! Thank you for being so prompt! We've taken a look, and we feel that the revisions themselves invite a few more questions that we'd like you to clear up.
1. For the history section, getting lost in the mountains is fine, but we'd like to ask what exactly they were doing traveling/what was their goal. Additionally, just for clarification, it would be impossible for them to have been going to Union as Union was not known to the world until about 3 months ago. We would greatly prefer it if Jacklynn's family was actually from Union as the number of random villages in the background of people's apps is getting a bit excessive (this definitely isn't your fault at all, but it's something that we're considering changing our policy on.)
2. For the abilities section, a five block snowstorm is a bit too much so we're going to need to ask it be toned down slightly. We also think that if you want her snowball-creating abilities to be more powerful at the final evolution, that's fine since it's consistent with being able to make blizzards happen.
3. The samples have not changed in terms of the personality they express, to be honest, and revolve around the same theme: being away from her mother. We invite you to answer the questions included in the application so we can get a feel for the character beyond her separation from her mother.
Thanks, and we hope all of this makes sense! We need to require a bit more clarification from OCs as they don't have a known background to go off on.
Re: Revisions
1. For the history section, getting lost in the mountains is fine, but we'd like to ask what exactly they were doing traveling/what was their goal. Additionally, just for clarification, it would be impossible for them to have been going to Union as Union was not known to the world until about 3 months ago. We would greatly prefer it if Jacklynn's family was actually from Union as the number of random villages in the background of people's apps is getting a bit excessive (this definitely isn't your fault at all, but it's something that we're considering changing our policy on.)
2. For the abilities section, a five block snowstorm is a bit too much so we're going to need to ask it be toned down slightly. We also think that if you want her snowball-creating abilities to be more powerful at the final evolution, that's fine since it's consistent with being able to make blizzards happen.
3. The samples have not changed in terms of the personality they express, to be honest, and revolve around the same theme: being away from her mother. We invite you to answer the questions included in the application so we can get a feel for the character beyond her separation from her mother.
Thanks, and we hope all of this makes sense! We need to require a bit more clarification from OCs as they don't have a known background to go off on.