bravenewmods: (Sheepy)
Brave New World Mods ([personal profile] bravenewmods) wrote 2014-04-27 07:03 pm (UTC)

Revision Request

Before we can approve this application, we need some clarification in multiple fields in this app. It is mentioned that Jacklynn does not know anything of her past, however, we will need to have details pertaining to where she was from, how she got to where she was when she was found, and when and how she was found. If you wish, you can PM these to the mod journal, or simply add them to the application. We would also like to see further fleshing out of her Enlightened abilities, what exactly she is capable, what her various evolutions will entail/look like, etc.

As far as her sample, we would like to see more of personality, as the current samples do not delve into this much. If you would prefer, you can either adjust the samples accordingly, giving ample material that we can get a better understanding of the character, or we invite you to fill out six of the questions attached to the application (the amount we ask for in lieu of a third-person sample) so that we can get a better grasp on what sort of character Jacklynn is.

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