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Owain ([personal profile] thehandhungers) wrote in [personal profile] bravenewmods 2014-01-06 12:20 am (UTC)

Re: Revision Request!

Fixed the App a bit to reflect the comment and adjusted the AU change! Let me know if you need more than this:

AU Deviation:
He'll put the same story telling and naming fantasies to work with his and other people's Pokemon. He is going to be highly disappointed with those who don't give their Pokemon unique names. For Brave New World he is going to focus more on the bond between Enlightened and Pokemon than Warrior and Weapon. With the great war behind them, they are going to have to work together to form this new world and it is going to take the best of both parties to do this if they intend to live together. He's also going to see the bond as a step in the right direction towards one day reclaiming the world.

He still blames himself a bit for his father's death and his inability to be there to save his mother.

Since this is retaking the world rather than living in a world on the brink of death, Owain is going to lack a few of the childish traits he has in his home canon. There, he grew up in a world without the chance to be a real child and seems to act childish around his mother in particular when he goes back in time. Here, he does not have that. He's the adult now, and while his stories may be fanciful, he still sees himself as a more independent individual.

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