Before we can accept the app, we'll need to see some elaboration in the AU Deviation section. In the absence of the time traveling and in living in a world where Grima won, especially, Owain should display some differences in behavior, even if they're very minor. We just need you to go over how living in the world of this game would have impacted his thoughts/behavior in some manner.
About your notes...
"Can his parents have died to bandits?"
There are no bandits outside of Union, so we would suggest you alter his parents' deaths to have been caused by wild Pokemon. Inside of Union, bandits committing murder would be an extremely big deal, so it would be unlikely to happen.
"Also, Owain’s bound to make elaborate stories for how Pokemon exist. He also makes 4th wall-like comments in game (like naming special attacks the same name as other game titles in the franchise). Mind if he just blurts elaborate stories that borrow from Pokemon game Pokedex entries? If they’re true or not doesn't really matter to me."
Yep, this is fine!
"Lastly, can there be a family whose crest appears on the back of their hand? If so, Owain will bare that mark with pride."
Revision Request!
Before we can accept the app, we'll need to see some elaboration in the AU Deviation section. In the absence of the time traveling and in living in a world where Grima won, especially, Owain should display some differences in behavior, even if they're very minor. We just need you to go over how living in the world of this game would have impacted his thoughts/behavior in some manner.
About your notes...
"Can his parents have died to bandits?"
There are no bandits outside of Union, so we would suggest you alter his parents' deaths to have been caused by wild Pokemon. Inside of Union, bandits committing murder would be an extremely big deal, so it would be unlikely to happen.
"Also, Owain’s bound to make elaborate stories for how Pokemon exist. He also makes 4th wall-like comments in game (like naming special attacks the same name as other game titles in the franchise). Mind if he just blurts elaborate stories that borrow from Pokemon game Pokedex entries? If they’re true or not doesn't really matter to me."
Yep, this is fine!
"Lastly, can there be a family whose crest appears on the back of their hand? If so, Owain will bare that mark with pride."
This should also be fine.