We would like to see just a bit more in the Enlightened abilities section. Specifically we want you to nail down the extent of his abilities so we can see it more clearly. Barrier should be breakable with enough application of force (how much?) and we want you to decide the range of his teleporting (the max can be up to a few miles). Noting the changes through evolution could be helpful to gauge his abilities better.
Revision Request!
We would like to see just a bit more in the Enlightened abilities section. Specifically we want you to nail down the extent of his abilities so we can see it more clearly. Barrier should be breakable with enough application of force (how much?) and we want you to decide the range of his teleporting (the max can be up to a few miles). Noting the changes through evolution could be helpful to gauge his abilities better.