We'd like to see a bit more in the Enlightened Abilities section. It's written very vaguely as it is, and we'd like to see you go a bit more in-depth about the types of abilities that Garry would have. It reads almost like you're intending for him to simply be a normal human who can use Pokemon moves, which is fine, but we'd like to see that stated more clearly than it is now. More details about his evolutions would be helpful as well, and you should note how he changes after his first evolution and after his second, or at minimum, what he would be like at full power.
Revision Request!
We'd like to see a bit more in the Enlightened Abilities section. It's written very vaguely as it is, and we'd like to see you go a bit more in-depth about the types of abilities that Garry would have. It reads almost like you're intending for him to simply be a normal human who can use Pokemon moves, which is fine, but we'd like to see that stated more clearly than it is now. More details about his evolutions would be helpful as well, and you should note how he changes after his first evolution and after his second, or at minimum, what he would be like at full power.