bravenewmods: (Void)
Brave New World Mods ([personal profile] bravenewmods) wrote 2014-01-05 04:09 am (UTC)

Revision Request

The app as a whole is generally fine, just two minor issues.

1. The link to her canon history does not appear to work, I'm getting a 404 error. Please provide a proper link.

2. Her ability set as described is generally fine, but it does reference a number of higher-level abilities that she might not initially start with. Please address how strong her powers are initially and how they will grow into the level of potency already described. Also the phrase "manipulate moonlight and darkness to her whim" is very broad, please narrow that down in scope as it implies a level of control reserved for Legendaries.

Post a comment in response:

If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org