Everything looks great otherwise, but we'd like to see slightly longer response to the questions for the First Person Sample. They're a bit minimal and as they are, don't give us much sense for the character's voice. A few sentences per response should be sufficient, or at least, responses that aren't very short fragments.
Revision Request!
Everything looks great otherwise, but we'd like to see slightly longer response to the questions for the First Person Sample. They're a bit minimal and as they are, don't give us much sense for the character's voice. A few sentences per response should be sufficient, or at least, responses that aren't very short fragments.
Thank you!