We've looked through your app, and it's quite thorough, but we had a few revisions we'd like to ask concerning the Signless's abilities. The extrapolation of the ability to see memories based on his canon powers and probable Seer of Blood role is alright (though we'll be asking for a permissions post); however, we feel it's too powerful for him to be able to communicate with people at such a great distance, regardless of the emotional bond. He can have greater control over these powers as he evolves, but he'll need to remain in the vicinity of the person he's communicating with.
Additionally, we feel the loss of the Rock typing should mean that the Signless becomes less durable than previously as he's exchanging a defensive type for an offensive type and receiving a corresponding offensive boost.
Finally, super-minor, but we'd prefer that the exact notation of 'five days' not be used describing his journey from Refuge to Union. Just to keep things more open-ended. Something like 'several days' is alright.
Let us know if these changes are acceptable to you or if you have any other questions, thanks!
Revision Request!
We've looked through your app, and it's quite thorough, but we had a few revisions we'd like to ask concerning the Signless's abilities. The extrapolation of the ability to see memories based on his canon powers and probable Seer of Blood role is alright (though we'll be asking for a permissions post); however, we feel it's too powerful for him to be able to communicate with people at such a great distance, regardless of the emotional bond. He can have greater control over these powers as he evolves, but he'll need to remain in the vicinity of the person he's communicating with.
Additionally, we feel the loss of the Rock typing should mean that the Signless becomes less durable than previously as he's exchanging a defensive type for an offensive type and receiving a corresponding offensive boost.
Finally, super-minor, but we'd prefer that the exact notation of 'five days' not be used describing his journey from Refuge to Union. Just to keep things more open-ended. Something like 'several days' is alright.
Let us know if these changes are acceptable to you or if you have any other questions, thanks!