The application looks primarily alright, but we had a concern about part of your AU, the bit about the kidnapping. As Rashid is an applicable character to the game, we would prefer that he not be named as the kidnapper and instead replaced with someone of unknown identity. Additionally, we're not sure that kidnapping is the best way to represent the circumstances of the canon, as kidnapping would be a very severe crime in Union. The act itself is also somewhat poorly explained - why did the kidnapper let him go and what was the purpose of the action in the first place?
We would like to see a revision to this portion with either a clearer explanation of the kidnapping or a substitution of a different situation in which Quatre met a Pokemon and recognized his Enlightened abilities. Thanks!
Revision Request!
The application looks primarily alright, but we had a concern about part of your AU, the bit about the kidnapping. As Rashid is an applicable character to the game, we would prefer that he not be named as the kidnapper and instead replaced with someone of unknown identity. Additionally, we're not sure that kidnapping is the best way to represent the circumstances of the canon, as kidnapping would be a very severe crime in Union. The act itself is also somewhat poorly explained - why did the kidnapper let him go and what was the purpose of the action in the first place?
We would like to see a revision to this portion with either a clearer explanation of the kidnapping or a substitution of a different situation in which Quatre met a Pokemon and recognized his Enlightened abilities. Thanks!