Hello! Thanks for your application! The app looks mostly fine but there's a minor point we'd like to discuss with you:

In regards to the first line: "Sinbad was originally from a distant city-state not far from the Archipelago that had fallen onto hard times due to constant warring, and his father was among the countless casualties", would you be amenable to simply placing this city-state in the Archipelago? We'd prefer not to create off-screen civilizations and it doesn't seem as if there would be any issue with moving it into the Archipelago proper.

Thanks! Please get back to us within 72 hours.