bravenewmods: (Wighty)
Brave New World Mods ([personal profile] bravenewmods) wrote 2014-07-25 02:40 am (UTC)

Revision Request!

Heya! Thanks for applying to the game!

I'd like to ask for a few revision requests to the AU History and AU Deviation sections. Essentially, I'd like to get a better sense of how Lin will function within the setting of the game, and these sections are a bit sparse. For the AU History in particular, could you briefly outline perhaps what Lin has accomplished within the Swords of the Savior and also her attitude towards her job? I'd also like to see her conflict with her sister expanded upon (what would be the reason for the conflict and what would it mean in the context of the game as opposed to what it's like in canon?) as well as her relationship with her family. From reading the Canon Personality section, it feels like this is an important part of her character, and this is glossed over fairly quickly.

In the Deviation section, I'd like to ask for some more about Lin's attitudes towards the setting, especially in regards to her relationship with Pokemon and her role in the Swords of the Savior within Union as opposed to the police in canon.

Let me know if you have any questions! Thanks!

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