bravenewmods: (Wighty)
Brave New World Mods ([personal profile] bravenewmods) wrote 2014-07-15 03:09 am (UTC)

What we mean is that you're putting differences between the AU History and the Canon History and how they change the character in the History section instead of the Deviation section.

For example:

"Minako doesn't travel away from Union like she travels away from Japan in canon, and also has not yet awakened herself as the reincarnation of one of the ancient warriors that defended humanity against the Legendary Pokémon. At some point, I'd like her to bond with a Meowth so I can start her down the road of being on the Devine Defense Force with the other Senshi.

She also doesn't work with the police at any point in-game."

This stuff is all part of the AU Deviation. We wanted to see it in the AU Deviation section, with some explanation about how these changes might affect the character and her personality.

Since you've addressed some of these things in your new Deviation section, you can just delete that portion or shuffle it into the Deviation since it was a little confusing. Respond here when that's done and you're good!

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