I'm a little uncertain of what was meant by: "...you seem to have put a significant part of the Deviation into the History section."
Is this the impression that was gained because I didn't have enough in the Deviation and AU History sections? I didn't include any Pokémon AU history in the canon history, so I'm a bit confused. ^_^;;
I hope that my changes help a bit on this. For the most part, her history would be parallel prior to her awakening. I've clarified more in the AU sections on what her life would be like after her awakening. I hope it's enough! ^_^
Re: Revision Request!
I'm a little uncertain of what was meant by:
"...you seem to have put a significant part of the Deviation into the History section."
Is this the impression that was gained because I didn't have enough in the Deviation and AU History sections? I didn't include any Pokémon AU history in the canon history, so I'm a bit confused. ^_^;;
I hope that my changes help a bit on this. For the most part, her history would be parallel prior to her awakening. I've clarified more in the AU sections on what her life would be like after her awakening. I hope it's enough! ^_^