The AU History and AU Deviation are a little confusing right now, because you seem to have put a significant part of the Deviation into the History section. We'd like to ask that you flesh out the the AU history a bit more with possibly another paragraph and revamp the Deviation section. In the Deviation, we'd also like to ask you to address some of her thoughts on living with Pokemon and some of the differences between being a Senshi and being a reincarnation of someone from the time of the Savior that she might consider.
Thanks!
EDIT: Also, Light of Ruin isn't a legal move that exists right now; it's data that someone found through a hack, so we'd like to ask you to pick something else if possible.
Revision Request!
Thanks!
EDIT: Also, Light of Ruin isn't a legal move that exists right now; it's data that someone found through a hack, so we'd like to ask you to pick something else if possible.