Very minor! Everything else looks good. In Marisa's app, you've stated that her family strongly dislikes Enlightened, which generally goes against the prevailing attitude of Union society. This is acceptable, but could you briefly elaborate on the reason why? Feel free to edit it straight into your app!
NOTES: -On the eventual enhancement of the Mini Hakkero, that's fine! -On running away, she probably wouldn't be arrested so much as she would be detained for a few days since she's underage and then forcibly returned to her father. This could still involve some time in detainment, though, at your discretion.
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In Marisa's app, you've stated that her family strongly dislikes Enlightened, which generally goes against the prevailing attitude of Union society. This is acceptable, but could you briefly elaborate on the reason why? Feel free to edit it straight into your app!
NOTES:
-On the eventual enhancement of the Mini Hakkero, that's fine!
-On running away, she probably wouldn't be arrested so much as she would be detained for a few days since she's underage and then forcibly returned to her father. This could still involve some time in detainment, though, at your discretion.